I posted it yesterday on Zetaboard’s Nikki and Helen forum. I’ve also started and contributed to other posts on this site, I love the insights on there.
Under the first instalment, I explain how weird it was to write other people’s characters and that it’s not my usual style. We’ve been debating the style of Bad Girl’s writing, and whether it’s too short and misses things, or whether its subtly is part of its quality. Personally, I think the former.
It wouldn’t let me put them all in one file as it’s too long (22,000 words). Here’s the links:
If you’ve got any more specific feedback (make criticism constructive please) I’d love to hear it